Manon
My
flight to Hawaii
“Hi guys!” I said.
I finally had found them. They
were already waiting to get on the plane. We were going to Hawaii for the first
time, me and my three friends. It was not only the first time going to Hawaii,
but it was also my first time going on a plane. My parents never liked planes,
neither did I.
“Hi Ella,” Isabel said.
“Hi guys!” Alex said.
“Hello,” said James.
“I am so excited!” said Isabel.
“Me too!” James and Alex said at the same time.
“Ella are you okay. You seem a little bit off,” Isabel asked.
“I am fine, don’t worry,” I said. I was not fine. I was scared of taking
a plane. I never had taken one before.
“I
don’t know if this makes you feel any better, but I did some research. I found
out that the probability
of our plane going down is
around one in 5.4 million. So do not worry,” Alex said.
“Thank you, Alex. That does make me feel better,” I said.
Once we got on the plane, we were trying to find our seats. There were
so many people on the plane. It was crazy. Unfortunately, we did not get a seat
next to the window. Well, I did not actually care. Isabel absolutely wanted to
sit next to a window. Once we had found our seats, at the front of the plane,
we all sat down and organized our stuff. It was going to be a long flight,
twenty-hour flight, because we lived in France.
Once everyone was finally on the plane, that took about thirty minutes,
the plane started to move. I got scared, so scared.
“Its
fine, you are going to be fine, we are going to be fine. Do not worry.
The plane is just taking-off,” Isabel said, “And I am here, not that I can help
that much but I am here,” She laughed.
“Thank you, Isa,” I said.
To be honest it was way better than I thought it would have been. 4
hours had already past, I had watched a movie and I ate breakfast. Later on, we
played a card game with Alex and Isabel. James was sleeping was sleeping very
peacefully. We were playing Uno. It was really nice, and it made the time past
quite fast. Later on, James joined us, and we played for thirty minutes. I
slept for about two hours. I was really tired. I had not slept the night
before; I was really stressed about taking the plane.
A few hours later It was 18:00 and the flight attendants came. They gave
us the dinner menu and I chose to eat a chicken sandwich. A few minutes later
the flight attendants were back but this time with food. They gave me my
sandwich and I ate it joyfully. I was happy because my first time on plane was
going perfectly fine. The sandwich on the other hand was not as good as I had
imagined it. It felt like I was chewing on gum. It took forever to chew on was
piece of chicken.
“How is it going El?” James asked me.
“I am perfectly fine,” I said, “how are you, Jim?” I asked.
“I am perfectly fine,” he laughed.
“How is it there Lex and Isa?” I asked.
“We are perfectly fine,” Isabel and Alex said.
We all laughed until we heard the sound ‘bing’.
“What is that guys?” I asked.
“I don’t know,” Alex said.
“Ladies and gentlemen I've turned on the fasten seat belts sign and
asked the flight attendants to be seated, we may be entering an area of
turbulence and would like everyone seated for safety,” the voice announced.
“Isa?” I asked.
“It’s fine. I have already experienced this. It is nothing bad. The
plane is just going to move a little bit. It happens because the plane goes
through some clouds. But it is nothing to worry about,” Isabel said.
“Ok...” I said.
Ten minutes past and the plane is still moving. Fifteen minutes. Twenty
minutes. Twenty-five minutes. Thirty minutes have past, and the plane is still
moving. Forty-five minutes later the plane was moving like a little boy shaking
a coke can. I looked to my side and I saw Isa, Lex, Jim and all the people on
the plane stressed. Everyone is moving, packing their bags. Soon enough I am
also panicking. Isa is starting to gather all her stuff, so I start to do the
same. Until we hear the voice of a man screaming: “Easy Victor.”
“What?” I heard James said between all the screaming of people.
“Easy Victor… Easy Victor… I heard about in a book…” Alex said.
“Alex?”, I asked, “Alex, what does it mean?!” I asked.
“It means… It means that… That they cannot control the plane anymore,
that there is too much turbulence… We are going to crash…” Alex said.
I could not believe it. I could simply not believe it. I thought that
everything was going to be fine. I was wrong… Soon enough the plane began to
move so many people could not even stand anymore. Everyone was on the floor of the plane.
People were screaming until something made everyone go quiet. The door opened
on each side of the plane; evacuation slides were noticeable from each door. I
could not see anything. It was dark outside. It was so dark it looked like I
was in a room with no light, no light at all. Soon enough there were people
evacuating through the doors. Isa screamed my name and I followed her. It
happened so fast I barely remembered what had happened. I just remember me
sliding down one of the evacuation slides and landing in water. There were
people swimming to inflatable boats. I continued following Isa. We were
swimming to one of those inflatable boats. There was so much happening that I
could not concentrate on anything or maybe just one thing: where were Lex and
Jim.
I woke up on an Island. Not knowing where I was, I stood up and walked
towards Isa.
“Isa!” I screamed.
“Isa!” I screamed again.
She woke up and saw me. She stood up and hugged me.
“What happened?!” she asked me.
“You guys passed out…” James said.
“Oh my god. James,” I said.
“Alex is gathering all the people that survived,” he said.
“James, could you tell us what exactly happened?” I asked.
“As
you probably know the plane crashed… Luckily, we survived, by we I mean the
four of us. Sadly, a lot of people died. Thirty people survived, including us.
When you were trying to get on the inflatable boat you could not because you had
passed out, we do not know why you passed out, but we know you did. A guy
helped you on the boat I think it was one of the flight attendants, we have no
idea who it was. We should be thankful he helped you guys. Anyways when you
were on the boat the guy brought you guys to this island. We don’t know where
we are currently, but we will find out, don’t worry,” James explained.
Thirty of us. Only thirty. Around two hundred persons on the plane and
only thirty survived. We were the only ones left, the only ones to make it to
the island. I repeated these sentences at least five times before I believed
what had happened.
i liked how your story had a plot twist where it went from everything going great to everyhting going bad.
ReplyDeleteI liked how your story had suspesne at the start with Ella being scared to go on a plane because she thought it would crash, which it later did
ReplyDeleteThe use of figurative language is well used
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